Thursday, July 16, 2015

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DON'T LEAVE AGAIN
If you could travel through pain and time,
If you would listen to the emptiness in this rhyme;
......... The hurt of my heart,
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Chinedu Dike 01 August 2015

Beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned from inner recesses of the heart with conviction. Distress in the bliss of love occasioned by a lover's unnecessary absence well depicted in the poem. Indeed, in togetherness lies happiness. A lovely poem with good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing Ifeyemi.

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Thanks bard, i do appreciate your comment.it is quite overwhelming. #awed

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