Wednesday, October 25, 2017

Don't Know Why Comments

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Don't Know Why
You are so beautiful that I forgot all words of praise
You have touched my heart in a different, unique way
On your cheeks I can see all colors of rainbow in craze
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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan
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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 December 2021

Please keep writing!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 December 2021

Not many but a few idiots like Hentanzu are bane to human society. You are a wonderful poet, people keep writing!

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Rupert Hentzau 02 November 2017

Don't know why But this poem made me cry I think I am going to die (And that is not a lie) I see rainbows everywhere From the colors in your hair Seven gorgeous shades In your long and lovely braids The black mole on your chin, Will it make me sin? Baffled why the wine Should come within a tin. Curvatures and curves Are affecting all my nerves, I think I'm going to cry Because you used hair-dye. Your soft and silky dress Is full of bulging flesh, Perhaps you should wear cotton, Then you won’t appear so rotten. Oh, you are so fat (With a double chin at that!) And my heart is dangling down Because I’m just a clown. Now let us sadly say That jumbled in those rays I still am in a daze Seeing such poems praised.

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Stupidity prevails and needs no bounds, biased Rupert

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Bernard F. Asuncion 25 October 2017

Such a lovely poem Col Muhamad... a huge 10+++++

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Wonderful comment dear Bernard

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

Abbottabad Pakistan
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