Wednesday, November 2, 2005

Don'T Keep It In Comments

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Are u breathing,
I can’t tell,
All I see is you laying their,
Lifeless, helpless, not moving,
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Katie Huntress
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Mary Nagy 02 November 2005

Great advice Katie! You're right.....ya gotta get it out. Wonderful poem. Sincerely, Mary

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