Look past my brown eyes,
Look past the walls that I have built,
Look just beyond the pain and confusion
And there you will see the fear and loneliness,
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Fear and lonliness. look there is lot of love behind all that you see in me. very nice poem depicting the inner feelings. thank you. tony
I've looked past everything you spoke on. And I find your poem a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing! ! I'm definitely voting on this one!
Well expressed thoughts and feelings, a poignant bit of verse written from the heart. A work of a sober mind. Thanks for sharing, Jessica.