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Don't Immortalized This Love

Don'timmortalized this love,
A flowers can be draped
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Benjamin Chiu Uy
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 03 March 2020

Just a slight correction - grammatically it should be " Don't Immortalize This Love" (not " Immortalized" with the " d" ;) . Secondly, , " A flower..." (singular, no " s" or " Flowers..." plural without " A" ;) and lastly " Disgust" without the " s" because you do not count abstract nouns or or emotions such as " one hates, two hates, or three hates."

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