Someone punch me. i want to feel pain
Bruise me. Hurt me. scar me in my flesh
Slap me, kick me, push me around
Pick me up and slap me to the ground
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You did it again: Created a killer poem with an abstract core idea. This one is soo great... you must get tired of me saying that...but really; 'kick me as I lay in a lump' it's the ultimate in underhanded fighting but it would still hurt less than 'good bye.' Definitely suceeded in creating a mental image too. ~Amber~
I feel what you are saying. It is easier to deal with physical hurt than with a hurting heart. It is better for someone to kill you than to hurt your feelings because hurt feelings kill someone slowly, the pain never seems to go away. Good work Gabriella. Cheers!