Wednesday, December 2, 2015

Don’t Go With That Boy Comments

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Don’t Go with that Boy

Don’t go with that boy
Ignoring my heart-felt love
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shakil ahmed
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Alufa Oke Joshua 20 December 2015

nice buildup of words, indeed your heart is where love dwell.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 06 December 2015

a nice poem i liked the way u projected

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 December 2015

Mirage! ! But with hope; all in the name of love. Nice work.

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Lorraine Colon 02 December 2015

If this is meant for a girl you care about, I suggest you present it to her. It is beautiful and very convincing. I don't see how she could ignore it. And the best of wishes to you.

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Neran Sati 02 December 2015

I cast an amorous glance, Very silently when I pass. beautifully caught up, cheers!

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T Rajan Evol 02 December 2015

And love is like that with so many do's and don'ts

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Badarpur, Assam, India.
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