Wednesday, May 2, 2007

Don'T Go Too Far Comments

Rating: 4.5

Don’t leave me and go too far
When I wish to be near
Don’t be as far as
A distant shining star
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G.S.Vasu Kumar
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Joscephine Gomez 05 May 2007

Sounds sincere. I like the second stanza the most.

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Commendable work, G.S....Smooth, mellifluous construction...Stellar imagework. Well crafted penning... FjR

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G.S.Vasu Kumar

G.S.Vasu Kumar

Bangalore, India
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