Don’t Go Sweetheart Comments

A perfect romantic poem devoted to celebrating the very first meeting of two lovers under the moonlit sky. Amazing composition with a lovely portrayal of nature and delicate feelings. life is just a night / yes, I am yours / yes, you are mine, Don’t refrain / I’ll die with my pain,

Ahan! ! ! ! Greaaaaaaaaaat one...really! ! 10 on 10

What a beauty, it's really amazing, I regret I don't know Bengali.........................10

Your brain, I feel is filled with liquid verse..... It keeps overflowing! Great, Akhtarji!

A beautiful poem about love, some fantastic rhythm and imagery, with some great killer lines. let your lips be, sweeter than sweetest, kiss me I am un-kissed, I’m beauty you always missed, Don’t refrain, I’ll die with my pain, when I am nothing more, just the remains of love, The whole things is fantastic, Well done!