Sunday, September 14, 2014

Don'T Go Far Off Comments

Rating: 4.1

Don't go far off, not even for a day, because -
because - I don't know how to say it: a day is long
and I will be waiting for you, as in an empty station
when the trains are parked off somewhere else, asleep.
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Pablo Neruda
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Rob Lamberton 30 August 2023

I feel this way sometimes!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 March 2021

I congratulate the extraordinary romantic nobel prize winning poet of this century... imagination at its full swing!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 March 2021

Typo: 1971

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 March 2021

This is one which could have influenced 1997 nobel comittee... fabulous use of hyperbole!

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Bharati Nayak 02 March 2021

Don't leave me for a second, my dearest, because in that moment you'll have gone so far I'll wander mazily over all the earth, asking, Will you come back? Will you leave me here, dying? --Intense feelings of love when a separation for a second seems unbearable---

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Soulmate Bizarre 02 March 2021

love Pablo

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Soulmate Bizarre 02 March 2021

I miss my soulmate, my soulmate is far and is not talking to me, discreet

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Savita Tyagi 02 March 2021

It is the wish of every dying person. Sadly Corona have shown us the helplessness of desires when faced with the might of fate. Very touchy poem indeed. It makes me pray in my heart to have strength to bear the suffering that we as humans go through collectively.

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Indira Renganathan 03 February 2021

Love is blind....this poem is an example...5*****

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Sharad patil 16 January 2021

, , 🇮🇳🇮🇳

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L Milton Hankins 01 September 2020

What a beautiful poem, well-crafted, expressive. Thanks for giving us this gift!

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Im on a cliff and this poem makes me want to jump off!

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cliff 17 January 2021

no! dont!

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hannahwashere 03 June 2020

i like this poem cause it is pretty much what we kind of need

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Abu Siddik 18 February 2020

Sharpest and precise urges for not parting with great wording,

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Navod Dilhara 29 November 2019

Lovely piece of heart-touching art.

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Dr Manoj Kishore Nayak 31 July 2019

Awesome

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Sehdev Sharma 29 July 2019

this was great stuff.....please read my poems too...u will enjoy

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Adeeb Alfateh 28 May 2019

great and great rated the great 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Adeeb Alfateh 28 May 2019

Oh, may your silhouette never dissolve on the beach; may your eyelids never flutter into the empty distance. Don't leave me for a second, my dearest, great expression

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Oh, may your silhouette never dissolve on the beach; may your eyelids never flutter into the empty distance. Don't leave me for a second, my dearest,

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