Don'T Go And Leave Them Comments

Wonderful long poem..

I read some of your poems and this struck me most. It's touching...it's as if you brought me to the moment when you were about to walk away from your family. I hope you create more poems that have the same intensity as this.

yYusof, this is such a brilliant piece, a parents love, all the varied emotions that well up in our heart when we think of our children, its truly unconditional love. straight from the heart.10+ mamta

Bro, this was definitely from the heart, the words you have written here, are not to dazzle but to impregnate your inner beliefs into the reader. Only a father could have written it in this form, Truth, understanding, regret, sorrow, and strength. We can do things in life that can be extraordinary...some..or should I say Most...would find most difficult to come back from, but when we have heart and a heart full of our joy.' our children'.......we can be away from them...but they're always with us...they are our strength our light, an unconditional bond of forever-ness. We will always do right by them no matter how difficult, we'd scale a burning 100 ft wall if they were on the other side....Innocence brings conscience in adults back with their darling smiles...And its their happiness that keeps us strong in the end, We fight, We Live, and most certainly give our life in order for them to live their lives to the best of their abilities....What we do now for them, will place them on the path to success of all life's joys.... Loved this one Sulaiman my brother.....heart felt and a true struggle in protecting your most precious gems....you chose right my brother. best wishes Jon.

beautiful poem with heart...