Sunday, February 26, 2012

Don'T Go Comments

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Don't go.....
The day is young
You've only just begun
To fly
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Annabel Cruz
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Patti Masterman 14 March 2012

I notice how all the lines balance one another, and there is a great harmony and peacefulness upon reading them. Also there is a yearning, a sincere emotional plea, embedded throughout.

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Juan Olivarez 29 February 2012

Well done Anabel very good piece. I was glad to hear from you again.

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Rajendran Muthiah 26 February 2012

Excellent poem to linger long in memory with its melancholy emotions flooding the heart.

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Annabel Cruz

Annabel Cruz

Havana, Cuba
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