Don'T Give Up On Me Comments

To me it is not the subject but the execution that makes this poem a 10. After all, have we not all seen horrid poems on any number of worthy subjects? He gives a beautiful write, with wistful images like the 'chitter-chatter line and these are my favorites: 'No man, not even in a dozen years, Of piggy backs, swings and slides, ' I put this one among my favorites list. Thank you Phillip for sharing.

You don't give a writing on this subject anything but a 10 unless the writer can't spell. Maybe, not even then. GW62

This was written beautifully.