Friday, May 11, 2012

Don'T Give Up Hope(Thought/Sad) Comments

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A young lad covered in sod walked by me this evening.
Skinny and frail as if he hadn't eaten anything.
Covered in dirt,
tears upon his shirt,
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Poet of the River
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Heather Wilkins 05 June 2013

We must always continue in hope. Without it there is no tomorrow. An enlightening poem

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Kevin Patrick 18 May 2012

I like the story line of this, the boys struggles against the elements and his desire to rise above it. Its a major contrast to your other poem about given up hope which seemed like a ying yang scenario, but I like this one more.

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Poet of the River

Poet of the River

California, but move around a lot.
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