Don'T Give Up Darling Comments

I gave my 10. The last lines are nostalgic. A film named Sunflower of Sophia Loren came to my mind. Great job done.

This is a beautifull felt-hearted poem by a warm heart. Such words for sure help not to give up! Thanks

song of the sunny bird to his sunflower sweet...well done, shiraz! 10

Simply and prettily put to great effect. Thanks Nightingale.

It is very gentle and warm poems the Nightingale, somebody will not dare on your poetic footpath to throw sunflower, especially, they harmfully for a throat of nightingale... Best wishes, Tsira

dust on your shoes, nice touch..