Tuesday, February 9, 2010

Don'T Give Up Comments

Rating: 4.8

Here I am with my arms wide open
My heart on my sleeve
I used to think I knew what I wanted
But not everything is what it seems
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Kristen M Brown
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Stephen Magill 14 April 2010

wow, this is sooooooo good. i cant tell if it rhymes or not. (i hate rhyming poems, mostly because a great one, is so hard to write) great flow, its all about flow, you know. wow.

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 19 February 2010

i guess you should name it 'advice from afar'... nicely written. keep it up: -)

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Kristen M Brown

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