Don'T Give Me Trust Comments

I'll leave you all torn up and blue, And I'll beat you trust and disjoint, You heart as it will rust, 'Cause I will be the one, Who betrays your trust. And that is when your trust is done. wow sweet poem and the pain is felt their in a realistic way..like what you expressed and sure its very much poetic way.. wel done..10/10

I like your poem. Don't knock yourself out that fast. Anyone can be trusted and everyone needs forgiveness when trust is broken. Have faith in yourself and you will succeed.

Yoau're a real feisty lady! I shudder to think of any man earning your ire. nice write.