Don't forget your roots
Look back to your beginnings
To where you've started
Remember to thank the past
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Beautiful...an excellent portrayal of the past, expressed in poetic form.10+
Remember to thank the past It led you to where you are...touching expression with nice theme. Beautiful poem.
Nudershada, we must all thank our beginings from the first humans. ++10 Robert
A wonderful tanka worthy of profuse admirations