Friday, August 14, 2009

Don'T Follow Me, Moon Comments

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don't follow me moon
me, i'm going down a dark path
and you, you're just shedding
extra light
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Alexzia Ferdinand
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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 15 August 2009

A fine simile between moon and man's nature. Both waste, wax and wane. But they also shower moonlight to cause pleasantness. It all depends on our moods and relationships. Nice poem.

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Subroto Chatterjee 15 August 2009

Thanks for giving up your share of the moon to me.....Keep dreaming! ! Cheers. Subroto

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Romeo Della Valle 15 August 2009

Dear Alexzia, your poem reminds me that the whole struggle in life is between shadow and light, and those like myself, caught in between...Nevertheless, time will reveal whether you remain in the dark or learned your lesson and slowly and wisely move toward the light...Love and Peace, Romeo

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Emancipation Planz 15 August 2009

Alexzia, your writing allowed me to follow your imagery and the vastness of your conveyance was brought home to this reader.. thanks for the share...

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