Sunday, June 22, 2014

Don'T Fall In Love With Me! Comments

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Don't fall in love with me
I am mere an illusion
A tiny part of this wonderful creation.
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Mihaela Pirjol 10 November 2014

This is a great poem Geetha. I really enjoyed reading it... so true!

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Ramesh Rai 03 September 2014

I gazed at the moon followed all creativity but could not notice when started loving n became the symbol of love for the people of this earth.

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Falling in love, and hurting your nose Is all to common among us folks To bend on your knee and offer a rose Is always a well played out hoax................ Very good write up... Actually love is body falling in love with a another body aided by stupid minds.

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Saadat Tahir 06 July 2014

Neela Nath (6/23/2014 11: 49: 00 AM) I think this poem is charged with double meaning.It's a kind of satire too.Very intelligent write! Admirable! indeed i second neela in her opinion...lovely poem

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Mihaela Pirjol 06 July 2014

The truth and wisdom shines in this remarkable write.Art at its best.

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Akhtar Jawad 04 July 2014

I think always there is a quality in someone that attracts others. This force of attraction cannot be controlled. When this attraction comes on its climax an emotional reaction of the same is love. This seventy years old Sanaysi Baba can only say love is helpless and it is a futile effort to advice someone not to love. But your poem is very beautiful and I really liked it.

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Harindhar Reddy 30 June 2014

Wonderful words flowed in to a poem. I cherish the philosophic theme of poem. your idea in the poem is echoing in my heart. A great way of expressing real love. Very simply love the soul which is permanent not the perishable body. Well done!

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Love not mortal being but thy soul is the message my all...............Geetha..............great write..................

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Amitava Sur 27 June 2014

A lovely poem you wrote Geetha, where I can feel you emoting and saying with a heavy heart not to love the you (the body) which is perishable...... beautiful.

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Soumita Sarkar 25 June 2014

Yup! ..so true we make Guest Appearances..............in this movie of life.............spirituality imbibed....Thanks....Will you read few of my poems....? ?

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Salini Nair 24 June 2014

nice like it...............

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Neela Nath Das 23 June 2014

I think this poem is charged with double meaning.It's a kind of satire too.Very intelligent write! Admirable!

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V P Mahur 23 June 2014

Dear poet, Very beautiful poem with the reality of this mortal body. I liked the expressions very much. Thanks a lot that you found time to have view of my poems. Your careful comments are a blessing for me.

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Heather Wilkins 22 June 2014

this is a beautiful write. The real beauty of the person lies deep within.

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Geetha Jayakumar

Geetha Jayakumar

Kerala Palakkad
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