Don'T Fall Asleep Comments

admirable, fascinating one.with wonderful flowing of prosees and verses. i enjoyed its bitter style. thankenstein~nb

admirable, fascinating one.with wonderful flowing of prosees and verses. i enjoyed its bitter style. thankenstein~nb

Hi, Impressive, Well done, Very very touching. Forgive me for all I was Forgive me for all I shall not I dont know why but It reminds me one of those poem that I read while passing university courses, Its name is C.L.M By John Masefield. Hope to read more of you: p: p: p

So deep like always, but what a sad thing is you always make me sad...Wish there's some poem of yours make me smile again...Write more Amir, dont forget you hold talents that people rarely have...Keep on :) _Unwritten Soul

I just have to echo what the others said.. this poem has a good flow.. and is a bit interesting.. thank you for sharing this..

I like it, Very interesting, I like your work :)

I like it, Very interesting, I like your work :)

nice work, Amir i admire ur diction of love

deep and interesting..fine flow to it

Very Interesting, Really well penned.

this poem has a good flow and was interesting