Tuesday, February 9, 2010

Don’t Drive, Bump And Crash… Comments

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Don’t drive, Bump and Crash…
When driving fast,
You’ve suddenly seen a police car
On your opposite lane
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Noorie Ali
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Yunlie Fontianty 19 February 2010

Nice poem of you like advise for we all must careful, discipline if we on the street. Yunlie Fontianty

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Merna Ibrahim 19 February 2010

A very good poem and I like the idea because this is the first poem for me to read about this issue.You sent your message in a fine way.You know there is an Arabic quotation says: 'fe al agala al nadama, w al taa'eny al salama' means (((in the speed regret and in the deliberation safety))) .It relates with your poem :) Keep it up and thanks for sharing.I hope you visit your poetry section. Merna

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