Don't Disturb Comments

Very nice, full of pleasant scenes and sense provoking images. But your message is well balanced. We can't always have what we would like.

I do like this write - read like spices infiltrating thoughts, interesting, well done

An interesting poem Sathya....using nature as a backdropp for each idea expressed. I like the imagery too

Really nice. Each verse has its own flavor. Had a beautiful read.

sometimes anything is an intrusion and no matter how pleasant we turn our back from them. a strong case for privacy. nice write

what a lovely poem. i truly enjoyed your deep thoughts.

Almost lyrical in its composition can be put to music to be sung as some nostalgic song! 10! -Raj Nandy

The style and treatment both top class, the flow and feel are excellent, These disturbing thoughts impacts our senses deeply and brings out the best.... I enjoyed reading this wonderful poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

rhythmic elements talking about distrurbing emotions..nice one

A depiction of disturb thoughts and emotions that brings out stresses and anxiety...nicely penned with fine metaphors and imagery...10+++