Wednesday, August 12, 2015

Don't Disturb Him, Please Comments

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He whom we all regard utmost
And keep with a highest esteem,
It has been a long long time now,
That very Truth has taken a long recess.
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Amitava Sur
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* Sunprincess * 26 August 2015

.........an excellent write...and a great theme ★

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Amitava Sur 30 August 2015

Thanks a lot Rachel.

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Savita Tyagi 23 August 2015

Wonderful satire on todays worshipers who worship lies, falsehood and every thing else that goes against truth. No wonder can't be disturbed. It has no place outside its coffin. Great poem Amitav. Thanks for sharing.

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Amitava Sur 30 August 2015

Many thanks Savita - for your valued comment

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Darlene Walsh 19 August 2015

Truth as been a victim as long as mankind has had language. But I agree that in today's world it appears that truth has indeed died. A sadly accurate poem about the state of today's world.

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Amitava Sur 30 August 2015

Thank you Darlene to realize the present days

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 14 August 2015

Truly, truth is the entity of God and it's disturbance provokes God annoyance

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Amitava Sur 30 August 2015

Thanks for appreciation from you end

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Daniel Brick 14 August 2015

Like RoseAnn I caught the humor and gentle satire in this poem. When we get too caught up in the spiritual life we forget the world of common experience. It has legitimate demands on us, especially being the place our children will grow up. Here is where children are most susceptible and we must both initiate them into adulthood and protect them from harsh forces..

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Amitava Sur 30 August 2015

Thank you Daniel, you got the humor in it and the satire too.

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Roseann Shawiak 12 August 2015

Ha Ha Ha! Great poem, love the pic! Total satire, you wrote it perfectly, Amitava! Straight from the hip, like you usually do, and it sure hits home very strongly! Great message, Amitava. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Amitava Sur 30 August 2015

Thanks a lot for yor valued comment.

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