Friday, January 13, 2012

Don'T Die On Me Comments

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Do not just lie there and smile at me,
Please fight back why can't you see?
Can't you remember the past with me?
We used to fight and never once flee.
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Lilian Chromious Eveson
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Ency Bearis 18 January 2012

A very encouraging write, nice piece.

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Dave Walker 13 January 2012

Like it. Really great poem. A great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, Human right.

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