Don'T Die Comments

Lovely poem, a good read.

A poem that offers inspiration to the despondent souls to cheer up and live life to the fullest. Appreciate the spirit of the poem. The capital T in the title - 'Don'T Die' may be edited to replace it with a small t. 'Here is hope In heaps of broken' - this expression is grammatically faulty.

Great write, Universal love, Unconditional love, Endurance, Selfless, Smiles hiding sorrow Sorrow hiding pain, Loved reading the poem, Added to my poem list

This is a moving poem and is admonishing all who read it to take heed and extract the most out of every waking moment they are alive.

a person.....crying to make your live....every moment of life.....

Life is precious. And this poem is well inspiring about life and the poet sees the life in its positives of love, light, and smile and everything. This is a valuable poem that I felt to me.

Sarkar, I loved it. You are forceful and I can understand how passionate you are. Good and inspiring write. Please do keep posting so that we are enthralled. (9)