Saturday, August 1, 2009

Don'T Die Comments

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'DON'T DIE ON ME NOW'!
I can't feel the flow
once you dropp I can never see you again ever
you'll be away from me forever
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chella Death
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 January 2010

'll have to think harder please don't dissapper from me, I don't want to be alone as I pause on the phone as I try to call for help, while laying on the floor bleeding I have a strange feeling......really heart felt words in it and honest feelings..... keeptit up....10 read mine...miss i miss you............. i miss............ go to hell

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Abby Mackaway 10 September 2009

I really like this. i read a couple of your poems and you obviously love poetry so keep at it.

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Ershad Mazumder 30 August 2009

Very good piece. I liked it. Keep on writing and sharing it.

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Jude Ogunade 18 August 2009

I will not die on you! What a poem! I hope this never happened to you. Your talents: audacious, your promise: great and original; please let your pen flow and let the inspiration grow! I enjoy reading you. As for me, I will live long enough to read from your budding brain!

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Sarwar Chowdhury 11 August 2009

Finely penned thoughts! 10+

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