Friday, February 15, 2013

Don'T Curse The Darkness Comments

Rating: 4.5

Your marriage ends ‘cause you're a jerk, and your wife's had enough.
For all these years, she's simply laughed and put up with your stuff.
Instead of trying to change your ways, in self-pity you immerse.
Why should you light a candle when the darkness you can curse?
...
Read full text

COMMENTS
Chinedu Dike 07 June 2015

Beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction. A lovely poem that depicts the unpleasant effects of bad attitudes and waywardness of some men. I like the purported message and rhyme scheme of the piece. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

1 0 Reply
William Chaplar

William Chaplar

Trenton, New Jersey
Close
Error Success