Thursday, July 28, 2016

Don't Cry, Mama! Comments

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Dont cry, mama!
I feel the pain than you,
Stand to your knees, papa!
Ices are melting in my veins too
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Chukwuebuka Adebayo
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Chinedu Dike 19 May 2020

Really a poignant bit of poetry written in verse with rhythmic splendour. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing, Ebuka.

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 June 2017

Hells are blazing in mine brain Mama, breast your crying baby again Dry your teardrops, mama! Someone is banging on God's door Change from bondage. A heart breaking prayer to God Crying before mum. Mum becomes a symbol of the protection of God. tony

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Adolphus Moses 26 August 2016

got it all...great poem..

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Egwu Collins 11 August 2016

Thanks for pouring ur spirit and pleas out

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Egwu Collins 11 August 2016

Very and very important to note MAGNIFICENT! ! !

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Emmanuel Chikody 03 August 2016

I'm speechless with only a second to utter one word..Fantastic! ! ! !

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Chukwuebuka Adebayo 29 July 2016

Youre real Kelly kurt.its brutally painful.

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Kelly Kurt 28 July 2016

Unfortunately, much of Africa doesn't get much press here. It is a shame and an outrage. I wish you strength and happiness

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You are real Kelly kurt.its brutally painful.

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Akachukwu Lekwauwa 28 July 2016

i can relate well enough with your writing, we all in this part of the world do. but there is always a ray of hope to look upon as your poem points out. i too have writen a couple of laments over the past few days about the goings on. The future is bright howbeit

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Paola Gianotti 28 July 2016

am so sorry. your emotion comes through very well.

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