Monday, December 10, 2007
Don'T Cry Comments
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I wish to write a story about my sad friend
Her life came to an end on a saturday night
She whispered softly in mye ear and told me Don't cry
I couldn't hold the tears that builded up in my eyes
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Fred Babbin
10 December 2007
Neat poem, but the past tense of build is built, not builded. The rest of the poem is so nice that it is jarring to see that mistake (?) .
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11/19/2025 6:13:04 AM # 1.0.0
Indeed a sad story but I agree with Fred you got your tenses a little mixed. You may think me very critical I am but only if I think thata talent needs fostering ivor Aka poeticpiers