Wednesday, August 24, 2016

Don't Crumble Comments

Rating: 5.0

Loneliness is not to crumble and fumble
no need to cry or scream in shamble
make the sad moments to scramble
let the damages and destructions... tumble
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v.m.saraswathy munuswamy
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M Asim Nehal 24 August 2016

Inspiring poem, Nicely written ...10++++ though we have plenty of choices to reshuffle be firm to lead a life, as a colourful ensemble.

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I am blessed to receive more positive comments thank a lot dear poet

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Unnikrishnan E S 24 August 2016

Hi Saraswathy, A very poignant poem on the way the poet looks at her life- how to make it worth living: ....we need to reassemble.... life as a colourful ensemble..... Beautifully penned. Thank you.10+++

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Happy to read your encouraging note, thanks poet

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 August 2016

To be kind and humble! ! Nice piece of work.

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I believe, these two magical nature do wonders, thanks dear poet

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