Saturday, November 23, 2013

Don'T Bury Me, Let Me Fly Comments

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Because I won't dream something more beautiful
than death
I'm giving you my dream, the way I can,
folded on a page, making use of you, the best I can,
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A Waltz For Zizi
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Dr Antony Theodore 29 March 2016

I want to fly, I don't want to carry the world on my chest. I want to see the sunrise and the sunset travel all over your old and wrinkled face. Don't bury me in the cold, let me stay here with your palm, a little more ......... wishes...desires... dont bury me, . i want to fly and see the sunrise and sunset-. God, nature, death, thank you for this poem. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 March 2016

I will try to touch the Sun for you! Nice piece of work.

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Lee Schneider 23 November 2013

A dreadful sinner forever I stayed With curse of Lord and people and myself And not a bit is easier me to be In spite of all this never was my guilt. My life is agony, but I am choosing it, Only because a death I better see.

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Lee Schneider 23 November 2013

A dreadful sinner forever I stayed With curse of Lord and people and myself And not a bit is easier me to be In spite of all this never was my guilt. My life is agony, but I am choosing it, Only because a death I better see.

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