Saturday, February 9, 2008

Don'T Bring Me Back To The Orphanage Comments

Rating: 5.0

The bell has rang
Faces of cheers mirrored across the classrooms
Packing their beg eagerly
Running to the compound
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
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Tiny Dancer 04 February 2009

I understand this longing for family. Very good imagery.

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Reshma Ramesh 13 October 2008

wow......very nice....

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Mamta Agarwal 13 July 2008

heartfelt, beautifully expressed, this difference between have's have not's, seen through the eyes of an orphan. touching poem

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Prachi Tiwari 26 April 2008

Its a beautiful poem..good to know that there are people like you who possess this talent to give words to pain..

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Marilyn Lott 23 April 2008

So sad when children suffer. Life should be only the best for them; cared for and loved. Often that is not the case. Keep writing and sharing with us. Best Wishes, Marilyn

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Abha Sharma 22 March 2008

a touching treat....reminds me of Amir Khan's Latest movie.....Taare Jameen par... nice imagery, a good one

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