Monday, December 17, 2007

Don'T Bring A Screwdriver To A Gun Fight Comments

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holding on for dear life
now you see yourself at the other end of this knife
now you beg for mercy
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Not The Pilot
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Chuck Audette 24 October 2008

I loved the title - thought I was in for some humor. But instead, an emotive piece is what I read. Well done. -chuck

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Dee Daffodil 17 October 2008

Yikes! The end has climbed through your window...turned out your light! That's enough to put fear in the heart of most folks! ! Great poem! Hugs, Dee

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 08 March 2008

the end loser...........well, seemingly we do have a lot in common pal, the musics...........

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Ronald Stroman 17 December 2007

i'd rather the cops catch me with a gun... than be around you... and not have one. lol take care.

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Tom J. Mariani 17 December 2007

You have left the reader to ponder - - who or what was being fought? Great concept and poetic way of putting it.- - 'fighting the person in the mirror/because you're not the best of friends.' This is the first of your poems I have read. I will look for more. Tom

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