Saturday, January 12, 2008

Don'T Break Me When I'M Already Broken Comments

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Don't break me when I'm already broken,
I'm not falling to pieces, I already fell,
Don't criticize me and say you love me,
Because you don't really care, and I can tell.
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chad fisher
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Lara Wolf 12 January 2008

i love your poem it really explains how i feel at the moment a word to the wise dont date goth guys they shatter souls thanks i think i feel a little better after reading it.

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Becca P. 12 January 2008

Wow very well written and it reminds me of me! ! i think i alot of people could relate...at least i can! who knew it could all go away after a long time. sorry im not a very good 'commenter! ! '

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