Saturday, March 9, 2019

Don't Blow In My Ear, Please Comments

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Don't blow in my ear, please
It makes me weak in my knees
Blow in my ear, and I'll follow you anywhere
I lose my inhibitions, and I cease to care
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Mj Lemon 13 March 2019

When humour and truth meet...always the best for verse. This one to myfavourites.

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Practicing Poetess 14 March 2019

Thanks so much, MJ, for honouring me by wanting to save my poem! : -)

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Jankovic Zoran 12 March 2019

I do not know why someone understands this song as a tease. I took this very seriously. I suggest that one Declination be written about blowing in the ear, I'm just afraid not to jump the price of pupy's on the market.

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Practicing Poetess 13 March 2019

Haha, Thank you for the hilarious last part of your comment, Zoran! : -)

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C F 09 March 2019

A tease of a poem, you should never tell any of your weaknesses, they need to be found. A well written tease of a poem.

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Practicing Poetess 09 March 2019

Thanks for commenting, Chito. I believe it's common knowledge amongst men about the vulnerability of the ear- - I don't think it's any great secret! So, women of the world, guard your ears carefully! : -)

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