Sunday, October 19, 2014

Don'T Be Down Comments

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Don't be down.
Keep both feet on the ground.
And take that frown off your face.
Remove that frown to be found.
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Kevin Patrick 19 October 2014

A great reaffirmation for life, despair is the one thing that can destroy a human being, especially when negative comments without constructive feedback erode a little of your self esteem (that's why its good to stay away from You Tube comments) . But the last stanza interesting, it almost sounds more like your trying to tell yourself not to be down, as if your looking into a mirror and trying to find the strength to keep going. But that just me

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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