Thursday, October 16, 2014

Don'T Be Defined - Stay Proud Comments

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Do not let growing up in the streets define you as a person?
You are older now and don't need to talk the street talk and slangs.
Educate yourself to what you can be, not what you was.
I do not want to be defined as a street thug or a ghetto rat
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Patricia Grantham 08 November 2014

An excellent write on this subject. Name calling is cheap and cowardly. God created all in His image. Let us all be proud of our individuality. Well done Louis!

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Abekah Emmanuel 19 October 2014

What matters is our status as human beings. Indeed, our geography should not define us....we must live and learn.....nice poem. Good job!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 18 October 2014

Very elegantly com[posed we human beings are really superb we must keep the pride and needn't to be defined but to prove as we are human love the copmosition

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Ramesh Rai 18 October 2014

First, without taking your consent i have added this poem in my poem list. Second, I have given full marks. Third, i like to say that this poem is most educative and every one must read this poem. Thanks for share. Regards.

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