Wednesday, May 14, 2014

'Don'T Be Alarmed...........' Comments

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it's only a hungry seventeen foot pony
shoved his inquisitive head through the second story landing's open window....
there....
see that hay/those apples?
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delilah contrapunctal.... yes, that's how I intended to spell it.........
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Rich in rabid realism my friend!

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Colleen Courtney 14 May 2014

Wow! What a great picture this poem plays out in the mind! Well done!

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Gajanan Mishra 14 May 2014

good writing, I like it, thanks.

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