Don'T Ask Me Not To Cry... Comments

I must say it was a very good read... I like the rhyming, but i wish it were in free rhyme... the pain n misery is apparent, still somewhere it seems like it misses to touch the heart deep inside... Still a great effort... My humble advice would be if you leave ur soul free, u can be the best ever... Keep it up... God bless you... Dr Kamran Haider

'how would you know how difficult it is to laugh could u live one day on my behalf? so that u understand the torment inside what u preach to me could u abide? ' how true....

This poem carries the weight that lies within, not only that of yours, but many other souls with similar predicament. Cry as you may, and laugh as you may. Both belongs to nature, and nature belongs to us.

Very good! Poem reveals the writer's understanding of pain and sorrow. Very well worded.

wow that one was very touching. Very good you still found time to make it rhyme!

All the best for your going on a laughing spree! Laughter is the best medicine as they say! A good write!