Thursday, May 1, 2014

Don'T Ask Me How Comments

Rating: 4.0

over the taps of fingers' dance
she says dinner is ready
giving me the appetizing chance
insanity's remedy!
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Juan Olivarez 01 May 2014

Touch of humor, and of reality. Realistic view well crafted.

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Khairul Ahsan 01 May 2014

'she knows it well don't ask me how to give me from poetry retreat! ' - That's true for me too! A nicely laid out poem.

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Colleen Courtney 01 May 2014

A cute poem. Nicely done.

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