Friday, September 7, 2018

Don't Ask Me Comments

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Dont ask me if i'm happy, just look within my eyes,
they scream of disillusionment and pain
for a life promised in youth of unending joy,
but replaced by numbing boredom
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Lodigiana Poetess
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Lyn Paul 09 April 2019

I pure hearty talk full of honesty is incredibly healing. I enjoy reading your words. Though poems keep jumping. Thank you so much for sharing your work.

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Lodigiana Poetess 09 April 2019

Thank you so much Lyn for your kind words x

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Rajnish Manga 07 September 2018

disillusionment and pain.... no-one ever sees the bitter tears, of a neglected heart.... //.... A very sad account of a very lonely heart. Emotionally insightful. Thanks.

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Lodigiana Poetess 07 September 2018

Thank you so much Rajnish, for your kind comments

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