Please brethrens, don't ever ask for it; it's wise to ignore it with
your sanity. Vanity is coming like a super model with chopstick
legs, don't let them fool you with pleasure in order for to steal
your heavenly treasures.
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Good warning, Felix! This is a great line: Vanity is coming like a supermodel with chopstick legs... Your poem reminds me of similar warnings at Proverbs chapters 5 and 7.7: 22 says He goes after her like a bull to the slaughter. Temporary gain can lead to permanent loss.