Tuesday, December 30, 2014

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Love's ecstasy flew on gilded wings
To a heart laden with woe,
Like flower buds, my dreams opened,
Then cruel Fate struck its deadly blow;
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Lora Colon
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 December 2014

And do tears still flow? nice line don't ask wth same sad start i still love and beleive

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Lyn Paul 30 December 2014

Beautiful words expressed with heartache. This is a boat that many of us have sailed and many masks have been worn. Thank You Lora Great work

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 December 2014

Love and pain! Left lonely in the rain. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

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