Monday, October 19, 2009

Don'T Comments

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If you don't mean what you say,
don't talk to me.
If you don't think I'm pretty,
dont' look.
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Brooke Peterson
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Christine Schmidt 21 October 2009

The person in your poem seems to be getting 'teased' with love. Maybe a little flirting going on? I like your form, force and line structure here.

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Stella Andrews 20 October 2009

i like i like. we do have very similiar writing ways.. that must be why i love all of your poems! ! :) x stella

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