Monday, December 14, 2015

Don't Comments

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Don't walk behind me
I won't lead
Don't walk in front of me
I won't follow
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 11 May 2016

See, how sharp and prickly are the thorns on a rose can be. Sill, a ice poem. Thanks for sharing.X

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Hans Vr 18 December 2015

Some people are really not worthy of our love. A paradoxical point is that they are not worth to be hated either 'cause hatred damages us more than them. Life is not easy, but if we manage to look at the sun or a flower, some beauty is almost always around to make life beautiful... :)

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Akhtar Jawad 14 December 2015

I think the poem needs a poey's short note to explain the reason for such a hate. Anyway hate has been effectively described in this poem.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 14 December 2015

A beautiful poem giving the message the poet wants to give in a straight forward manner.

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