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The best thing is be honest than live in lies, coz the more lies lie in tongue the more painful it will cause..So i say you are honest and that the best thing you can do... Hope both of you will find a way how to live something new and find happiness even in different way..The honest words were boldly told in sincere way, so i say this is good expression in poem :) keep it up my friend_Unwritten SOul

a good piece Yasser....keep it uppp :)

'You were my mysterious butterfly One night with me the second with another guy'.... these lines testify nicely the agony and the determination that we find inside this write...good work Yasser...10

True some ppl r nt tht deserving of love... Hope tht every1 hav thr right matchs.. Anywayz beautifully writin, theme is good, stronge word and full of emotion... Love it +10

Its good but harsh for the girl i feel pity on you and the girl at the time sorry for the love that die

it is so sad but it is good to let them go when you know they don't deserve you love all they do is lying in the moment and crying in the next moment..... i really loved it when i read it i felt the pain with it....10 Hataw

requited and unrequited love, as you know works both ways, Cheers Shimon

very wonderful poem with a creative writing good job +10

A non-typical type of composition! 'You were my mysterious butterfly/ One night with me the second with another guy./ Don't cry don't try, our love had been die.' So......10.

I was undecided about recommending this. But I finally decided that there are really very few poems of this kind out there. So, I decided to recommend it. GW62

wOw it's amazing i luv it so much you was right we share something ;)