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A perfectly symmetrical poem that demonstrates your very well developed skills, as well as a determination to handle this situation effectively. xx

The clear structure undescores a resolved and centered state of mind in which emotion must reluctantly be made to yield to objective control. Eloquently stated!

MIDNIGHT...POWERPUNCH PENNING HERE...THE TIGRESS INSIDE COMMETH OUT AND SHE DOTH ROAR WITH CHORDS MIGHTY...NICE WRITE, BLONDIE! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

This one is very well constructed and 'stylish' as Tara observes. The last two rhyming couplets are a poem in themselves! Great stuff. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

It's hard to recognise that a love is over, let alone embrace the past tense. Most of us cling on in forlorn hope; your way is much mose sensible, and a stylishly composed message. t x