Tuesday, March 1, 2016

Don't Comments

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Don't sit there and weep.
I don't sit in the ground asleep.
I already did my blow,
so don't put your face in the snow.
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Rebecca Springsteen
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Ryson Dsouza 01 March 2016

NIce in rhythm... Just like a story a young girl laying in the snow & enjoying the moment.. conveying dont weep..i have taken my blow breath. The emotion of liveliness expressed... Wonderful visualization.. keep writing..10

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Barry Middleton 01 March 2016

Is that blow as in cocaine? If not you might consider did my show. Either way it's a good poem.

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Rebecca Springsteen 01 March 2016

No, I honestly didn't think of it that way. Well then............................ Anyway, thanks for reading Barry! -Rebecca :)

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