Dominion Death Shall Have Comments

[this is what i just sent as a message to my friend, Is It Poetry]: - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - James, i like this. i even understand some of it, but i won't spend much time trying to understand it completely. i get the picture: Death has a lot of Dominion over things! ! ! i've already got one of yours in the July showcase, but i shall try to keep this in mind for August, ...........IF i am still alive to put together another one! ! ! ! death, the creepy thing, may get me first! ! yes, there are some 'errors' in your English, but not too bad. i really like the SOUND and the FLOW of this poem. bri :) to MyPoemList i plan to send it.

A riveting piece. Meticulously executed; moves with a cadence that thrums like a military funeral march. Well-crafted.